jaylo Posted December 2, 2010 Report Share Posted December 2, 2010 hey all as you all no me by now i've been doing a lot of mashups i;ve been working on my own tune a while now so i taught id post it up for some feedback http://soundcloud.com/jaylo/jay-lo-ye thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaylo Posted December 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2010 nobody want to give me some feed back on my 1st tune Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
simonross46 Posted December 5, 2010 Report Share Posted December 5, 2010 I had a listen the other day. It makes a great foundation but can definately be worked up some more. For me the main thing is to make the bassline stronger so it rumbles but I often complain about this with a lot of tunes! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaylo Posted December 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2010 cheers ye im still working on it jus looking for a few more ideas the stabs i dropped them down a couple octaves and and added a pad to it aswell Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tim451 Posted December 6, 2010 Report Share Posted December 6, 2010 To my ears it needs: Some sort of synth line or sequence of stabs an octave or two higher than the low stabs and EQ'ed to fill out the upper mid range. A slightly snappier swing on the bassline (43% is a good starting point) and the bassline could do with a bit more boost at around the 60hz level (60hz is roughly the bass frequency that you can feel in your body). A little reverb and panning on elements of the percussion to fill it out a bit. Maybe a bit of stereo widening here and there. Some heavy compression on some of the weaker sounding elements to give a little bit more of a kick. Possibly sidechain some of the synths with the kick drum to give it a bit of groove. Definitely liking what I'm hearing so far though. A bit more punch and a nice snappy swing & it should kick rather nicely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaylo Posted December 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted December 6, 2010 cheers man thanks for that im still working on it so far i dropped the stabs down a couple octaves and added a pad threw it im gona add A little reverb and panning on elements of the percussion to fill it out a bit im gona leave compression to the end of it and same with the stereo widening Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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